Monday 15 November 2010

First attempt of reflective poem...

I wrote this whilst commuting to meet a friend-

Chosen bus ride to avoid sweaty train,
weaving through the rush hour traffic, a non existent fast lane!
Watching the city ants leave office blocks with their sofa in eyes,
a shuv here,a trip there, the station their goal, there's no compromise.
The sunset peaking through the silhouettes of tall, shiny blocks,
shop assistants grinning whilst bolting the doors and locks.
Sniffing kids being dragged along by their mits,
then me, warm for now but soon to have cold peripheral bits.
No rush, iPod in
Enjoying a not so mad Monday of meeting and greeting!

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